oil on board (a4 board) 

Pencil on paper ( a5 Sketchbook )

Before I started the painting I worked out what composition would work best. 

Oil on board

(Work in progress)

I started to look at my photos and analyse them to make them work into a composition. For this painting I took two different images and cropped them and then put them together. From looking at the drawing and the painting I have decided that I need to change my  painting slightly as it does not look quite right. The jaw line is too thin and the hair line is also not wide enough . Another thing that I need to change is the eyebrows as it does not show his emotion as that is one of the things that I am focussing on.

I also need to change the drawing of the woman as it is not quite right. It is useful seeing them next to each other as I can see where I am going wrong.